Cinderella's Shoes Comments

enjoyed. Footman conveniently 'Fred'

excellent poem More fragments of splintering glass were swept up by footman Fred. 'What a woracious woman! ' Fred said. 'A most woracious woman! ' nice wordings

A great work. Congrats

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

triumph of goodnes and perseverence.......a fairy tale that evinces the age old wisdom...

poor cindrella was treated so badly by the wicked sisters, but in the end did she ever shine. Yes she did. lovely write

one of my favorite stories in childhood, you have an impressive vocabulary..i enjoyed it much

Dorothy sat and wondered If this was the place to be For just a short time earlier It was Toto and she Who had missed the flight to England And landed in this mess Where lads and ladies had A peculiar way to dress, And smoke and mirrors Were delivered by the press. Those shoes that others wanted Seemed just right for her And so through the looking glass She stepped and once again Was in (take a guess) __________. s