Wednesday, November 1, 2006

Cinderella Bella Comments

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My outstretched arms surpass the point
Of normal, taxing every joint
By reaching, gasping, pulling in
The cloistered thoughts that lie within.
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Bridgid Patrick
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Soulful Heart 30 November 2014

i agree with gina.......a wish as all of us for a free time to enjoy the moments of bliss...

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Gina Onyemaechi 05 November 2006

Bouncy, catchy, and sweet.

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Natasha Ashwe 01 November 2006

Captured; the intimate, timeless soul communion that resides in an enclosed space between two hearts that will not walk with them in the daylight for other eyes to see, only leaving its scent on a secret smile only its partakers may delight in. I'm carried away. I love your poem! x

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Barbara Terry 01 November 2006

I really like this Bridgid. It is so romantic and sweet, but true too. There is a lot of romance, emotion, and soul searching in this poem. I like poems that have charcter, and this definitely has that.: P Thanks for sharing, Bridgid. Barbara

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