Monday, April 6, 2015

Cinderella Comments

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Amidst a darkened night
lay a dreadful sight,
inside a pumpkin;
she made her home.
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Kerry Foster 09 May 2015

love this! ! ! going to be using this poem to show my English teacher with as we are currently doing takes on fairly tales thank you! ! !

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 07 April 2015

Woah a drastic twist and take on the fairytale in fan fiction and it was great for a change. U wrote it in awesome poetry even if a dark shadow on it. Pls do review my latest poem too titled mother natures. .....

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Kelly Kurt 06 April 2015

A powerful poem, Victoria. Thank you for sharing

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