Cinderella Comments

Very poignant write, Ivy. Your poems have a rare beauty.. Warm regards, Sandra

Amazing flow of energy and emotion here - drawing the reader along, asking 'How will this one come out, seeing it started so intriguingly? ' The ending didn't dissapoint, either, but finished with a fine poetic flourish of a message.

Thankyou Ivy. Always interesting and meaningful.Love Duncan

Wow! Great poem, Ivy.

I'm with Tiffany, great ending.

Yes, that ending's good. This poem says a lot, and it's from your heart. Indeed, the first stirrings of lived ideals are too tender for harsh sunlight, but they live nonetheless.

Ivy, this is lovely. thanks for sharing.