Cinderella Comments

wow this poem is the best poem I have ever saw in my life!

Ok..this is realy realy great! Congratulations! I loved it and it remined me the feeling of being in love...

A tight story. Well written because of its sharp point! I like it.

That's so sweet! It reminds me of what it's like to be young, going to church dances, hearing those songs that made you die/melt inside and the whole starry eyed magical experience of it and, what was for me, youthful crushes!

But I can’t breathe, whenever you’re with me. Can you feel my heartbeat in my chest It’s getting faster every second two different things...but overall its great! :)

But I can’t breathe, whenever you’re with me. Can you feel my heartbeat in my chest It’s getting faster every second Time slows down, you are better than the best But would you feel the same If my name was Cinderella

love it! ! ! ! ! you worked hard on it

overall the poem is good, however the first stanza is a little rough HD period 4

It sounds like great lyrics to a song

Love it! Written beautifully!

Love it! ! ! ! It was beautiful to read! ! ! !