Monday, November 5, 2007

Cinderella Comments

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This week I ran,
I ran from home.
My father was cruel,
He treated me like,
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Brianna Wilshusen
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Costa Anakiev 19 April 2009

dear girl, of course you'll find him. well written

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Anthony Edmond John 15 December 2008

Well Ur poem deals with an insight which I believe needs to be refocused.. all the same nice job Love. The Sage Anthony Edmond John +2348020984990

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Blue Eyes 02 December 2008

i don`t like the idea of running away from home, anyway, i don`t really know ur conditions concerning the poem, i love the way u expressed ur thoughts really nice images by the way.

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