Friday, April 9, 2010

Cigarette Comments

Rating: 4.8

Cigarette

i put you to my lips like i want to kiss you,
your smoke fills my mouth with ease,
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rinki nandy
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Anil Kumar Panda 14 July 2011

very well written poem.the long drags make the life short.liked it.

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An interesting obsrevation indeed! Enjoyed the read. D

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 08 July 2010

Romance with Cigarette [like Singer Suman’s ‘Tomake Chai’] …but here canvas is different and poet is symbolically writing ‘i would kiss no more eventually, ’…what ever happens in romance love …concludes, ‘for i am and remain a smoker candidly.’ Smelling Poet is having Freudian Slip [A slip-up that results from the operation of unconscious wishes or conflicts and can reveal unconscious processes in normal healthy individuals]…bubbling and surrealism of subconscious …nice diction…Rinki… thanks for sharing … Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Goldy Locks 09 April 2010

Time for my afternoon drag....smooth words you've written here. keep on, goldy

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