Cigarette Comments

very well written poem.the long drags make the life short.liked it.

An interesting obsrevation indeed! Enjoyed the read. D

Romance with Cigarette [like Singer Suman’s ‘Tomake Chai’] …but here canvas is different and poet is symbolically writing ‘i would kiss no more eventually, ’…what ever happens in romance love …concludes, ‘for i am and remain a smoker candidly.’ Smelling Poet is having Freudian Slip [A slip-up that results from the operation of unconscious wishes or conflicts and can reveal unconscious processes in normal healthy individuals]…bubbling and surrealism of subconscious …nice diction…Rinki… thanks for sharing … Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

Time for my afternoon drag....smooth words you've written here. keep on, goldy