Thursday, December 17, 2009

Cigarette Comments

Rating: 5.0

As you hold me to impress,
the first error is made,
you use me in depress,
when nerves have frayed.
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Rahul Aithal
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Allemagne Roßmann 20 April 2011

well written smoking is a killer instinct smoking smokes our life away

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Allemagne Roßmann 20 April 2011

Rauchen kann tödlich sein dhumpan jaanleva hai......................................................................well written

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Anjali Sinha 04 August 2010

wonderful rahul, you have a good sense of imagery well done - keep writing and sharing I like your poems -10 anjali

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Kelly Aragon 16 January 2010

That was awesome! Cirgarettes KILL, people! Don't underestimate them!

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