Thursday, October 26, 2017

Cigar Comments

Rating: 4.7

Love is burning like a cigar
The smoke is lifting from the hearts
The romantic flame is slowly
consuming and melting the souls
...
Read full text

Rini Shibu
COMMENTS
Robert Murray Smith 13 May 2018

A great metaphor for love.++10

0 0 Reply
Akhtar Jawad 09 May 2018

Fire of love and its pains nicely compared with a burning cigar.

0 0 Reply
Binayakumar Mohanty 05 November 2017

Creating a paradise always dreamt for.The poem is able to create itself.Nicely crafted.Thanks for sharing.

0 0 Reply
Rini Shibu 06 November 2017

Thank you so much Binaya for your comments Rini

0 0
Dr Dillip K Swain 02 November 2017

Cigar is a fascinating poem Rini..I enjoyed it..! !

1 0 Reply
Rini Shibu 02 November 2017

Thanks Dillip, glad that you enjoyed

0 0
Lamar Cole 26 October 2017

Very nice poem. I hope that the cigar is a Cuban one.

2 0 Reply
Rini Shibu 27 October 2017

Thanks Lam.. Yes Cuban, Romeo Y Julieta

0 0
Kumarmani Mahakul 26 October 2017

Like cigar love is burning. This is leaving trace of ash around and clouds are floating. Love still is creating paradise. Brilliant poem is composed...10

1 0 Reply
Rini Shibu 27 October 2017

Thanks Kumar for your comment Rini

0 0
Rini Shibu

Rini Shibu

India
Close
Error Success