~ Cicatrix Comments

I thoroughly enjoyed this.. a most wonderful poem 10+

This is very good. The heart is a honeycomb. Love is the honey itself.. Brian

oh my. such a refreshing poem. some poets only too well can elaborate another's feeling

Ah such a lovely poem Adeline, beautifully written.

Sacred tombs with locks that never rust...well put, so very well put. The last line is the nail in the coffin which only holds the lid tight until we reach again. I love this poem because it is true to life and put in perfect order..Great work!

Wow i am blown away by the beauty in this poem also i have learned a new word cicatrix Thank you so much adeline

a lovely poem. beautiful imagery

An amazingly touchy poem with beautiful imagery, like those tiny compartments of a honeycomb, some having a silent, sacred tomb of dead desires, hopes and aspirations in each, and the broad compartments of faith, love, hope and trust. So nicely written and easily understood, is the beauty of the poem.10/10!

Beautiful poem, very well done, with a perfect title!

Good sense of structure.

the compartmentalization of heartbreak and heartache we all keep inside can and will bring an early demise. If we can't lay them to rest.

Love it! ! I love when I can see what is written.

What can I say-a real soul searcher, earthy and worthy. I guess we will keep your scars an try to remember, or forget. A sad and moving write

wooow....i love this poem, i can relate to the 'honeycombs'...good work...love it

this poem connects us to aldous huxley's idea man is an amphibian, or to be more accurate, man is five or six amphibians rolled into one...simultaneously he keeps on conquering n confronting many folds n layers of his inner self that is divided into many cells n not-selves...you write deep...adeline.

A well written metaphor, and its wonderful thought that you created the 4 chamber of hearts into faith, love, hope and trust. And with the triscuspid valve and mitral valve as the doors. A very creative poem. I like it.

very well written, and takes the reader from room to room in that honneycomb

The first word that comes to my mind upon reading this poem is: Mercy. That is what this speaks to me; it's beautiful, it's deep... and it is true. Wonderful poem.

I enjoyed. Alot of wisdom in this poem. Thank you for sharing.

THe sacred Tomb has many secrets in it Sir excellent write about tender heart.