Saturday, July 31, 2021

Cicadas - Tanka Comments

Rating: 5.0

Thumblike cicadas
Smashed into the clean windshield
Of my new blue car
Splattered their sticky liquid
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Rebecca Navarre 21 August 2021

That was supposed to be as much as i like cicadas heh oops! .. God bless! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 21 August 2021

Heh, As I like cicadas it's kinda humorous! .. Sorry to hear about your car heh and the cicadas too! .. Excellent expressions! .. Definite 5 Stars! ...+++++

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 02 August 2021

The sound and the ensuing silence provide dramatic imagery. Well done!

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Anjandev Roy 02 August 2021

......defeaning buzz......brilliant....

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 August 2021

but still a very dirty result but not that splattered sticky liquid.Ours here they dried at once but still very dirty. fascinatingly worded.5 Stars full

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 August 2021

Indeed, the USA highways are so big that the automobiles have constantly cicadas flying against their front. We in the Netherlands have only insects flying against our cars,

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 August 2021

Beautiful Tanka.5 Stars full on Top!

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Varsha M 01 August 2021

Oh yes this happens. They have their fate written like this. So, we should admire we are better humans.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 01 August 2021

It happens! A Tanka worded powerfully. I can visualise it.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 31 July 2021

I felt yr guilt among yr words

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 July 2021

Your brief expression carries fathomless poetic depth

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M Asim Nehal 31 July 2021

Awesome....They are loud enough to seek attention and at times irritate.5****

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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