Thursday, August 6, 2009

Cicada's Song Comments

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That fog at dusk can almost be heard,
As heavy as the thundering of a bass drum.
Night birds beat their wings as gracefully as
A dancer would, with agility
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Claudia Krizay
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Dwi Utami 15 July 2010

hey poet. You dont have a mistaken write, everythng are god: thumb: yes i'know this poem about song, when i'have never so happy with song, but you have so much idea for creat poem, : thumb: i'tink i'must run fastly and become a winner in here...he.he.he god poem of you.you are the poet.

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Michael Harmon 08 August 2009

You are a poet who has found her voice. I am reminded of aspects of a Symbolist poem ('The moon disappears behind the mountains, ') and those of an Imagist poem ('Fog tip-toes behind the thicket') . This seems a successful blending of the two, while still being contemporary. I admire your work.

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Claudia Krizay

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