Church - The Fashion Show Poem by Richard Wlodarski

Church - The Fashion Show

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Yes maybe the church is a fashion show
Where hundreds and hundreds of people go
Every Sunday they come and stay
But how many really do pray
I notice the boys watching the girls
The girls with the pretty little curls
I see the girls watching the boys
Well it's truly better than toys
I observe men watching women
And the women watching the men
A little old woman strikes me
And I wonder why that should be
I thought we went to church for praying
But we observed ourselves watching

Sunday, April 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: fashion,home,house,hypocrisy,religion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 01 May 2018

Apart from being a place of worship and prayer, a church also promotes social harmony, get together and social interaction. But the decorum and dignity of a religious place should remain intact. Thanks for capturing the scene.

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Thanks for your positive insightful reply, Rajnish!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 April 2018

Some watch others and sometimes they watch each other. But Church is a Holy place to offer prayer to God. All should be careful during prayer time. Wonderful poem is drafted basing on your perception. This poem is meant for awareness....10

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Richard Wlodarski 30 April 2018

Absolutely, Kumarmani! Let's stop the hypocrisy. And focus on spirituality.

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Carl Roussell 29 April 2018

Your poem is a fine description of Put on your Sunday best!

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Richard Wlodarski 30 April 2018

That's an understatement, Carl. Thank you for the acknowledgement.

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