Thursday, May 31, 2018

Chuppa Chuppi Comments

Rating: 5.0

Where is Neil? Is he in the kitchen
Is he hiding behind the curtain
Or is he hiding under the table
I know you are playing this game.
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Priyanka Deshpande
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Bill Cantrell 20 June 2018

I adore every verse of this wonderful poem! ! ! Congrats my friend!

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Unnikrishnan E S 20 June 2018

Lovely poem. No wonder this one earned the title, Poem of the Day

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 June 2018

Behind the curtain! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 June 2018

Sweet childhood memories, Chuppa Chuppi played between grandparents and grandchild. Beautiful poem Priyanka. Congratulations on member poem of the day! ! !

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Very beautiful and touching poem that connects generations.What a wonderful memory you shared..

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Savita Tyagi 20 June 2018

So tender and sweet. A strong bond of love passed on to grandkids by loving grandparents. Thank you for sharing and congratulations!

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Akhtar Jawad 20 June 2018

Congrats! You sent me back in my childhood, loved this beautiful poem.

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Tom Allport 20 June 2018

a lovely tribute poem for someone much loved and missed...…………….beautifully written Priyanka

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Priyanka, this is a very cute poem. While reading your poem, i went back to my childhood. Grandparents play a very prominent role in a child's life. The sweet memories of innocence lingers on. I particularly liked the usage of Marathi words like dhya dhya, Ajja, Chuppa chuppi, which makes the poem very special. Congratulations Priyanka. :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 June 2018

wish you a better prospect in life for real laughs are the ones when your heart laughs when your deed is good when you help or support someone....touching expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for choosen this poem as POD.

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 June 2018

I loved to your lovely bindi Few words I learnt from you, were in Hindi. nicely written and depicted the infancy time well 10+++

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Hassan Hayati 20 June 2018

A poem with emotional trends. I think this is the game of life, once you search for those, left this life. congratulations for being chosen as poem of the day.

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Britte Ninad 20 June 2018

nicely penned - goodly captured the sense of child for grandparents... nice 10++++

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thank you Britte :)

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Rajnish Manga 20 June 2018

Congrats for this poem getting selected as Poem of the Day. Priyanka, you deserve it.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 June 2018

Priyanka, such a wonderful poem of the day... congrats for being chosen...10++++

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Thank you Bernard.

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Rajnish Manga 04 June 2018

It is such an excellent poem anybody would like to relate to. The title itself evokes many childhood images. The way you have composed the poem reveals many facets of familial relationships. Thanks, Priyanka. I loved to your lovely bindi Few words I learnt from you, were in Hindi.... You made me feel, I'm the prince I keep thinking ever since..... Why are you still playing that game? .... search me and call my name.

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Thank you so much Rajnish. Thank you for your kind words. I am glad you liked it :)

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Thank you so much Rajnish. Im glad you liked it. :)

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Jazib Kamalvi 03 June 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Priyanka D. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Thank you Jazib.

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Chinedu Dike 31 May 2018

Fine and lofty verse embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. A free gift of creativity on winged imagination elegantly brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. Heartfelt and very passionate. It touched my heart. Thanks for sharing Priyanka and do remain enriched.

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Thank you so much Chinedu for reading my poem and giving such a positive feedback.

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