Chupke chupke ek baat Shuru ho gai..
Aankhein 2 se 4 ho gayi..
Fir baar baar Deedar hua..
Unke saamne aane ka har pal intezaar hua..
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Sapne agar Sach hote... To kaafi dard aasun naa hote.. Inkaa hona bhi zaroori hai.. Aye dost..thoda dard bhi hai zindigi ka hissa Warna jamta nahi zindagi mein utar chadhao ka kissa
An amazingly expressed emotions of love.....well narrated...thanx for sharing :)
Thanks for this amazing poem with a lovely narrative which carried the suspense till the very end. Please keep up the good work. I quote a few lines: Chupke chupke ek baat yu Shuru ho gayi.. Aankh khuli to jaana ki subha hui.. Sapna tha itna sundar soch k phir dil baith gaya..
Thanks sir..the narrative had to be prepared in a way the twist at the end gets a smile on the face :) Your comments mean a lot
Chupke chupke ek baat Shuru ho gai.. Aankhein 2 se 4 ho gayi.. Fir baar baar Deedar hua.. Unke saamne aane ka har pal intezaar hua.. वाह! बहुत खूब
Bahut bahut dhanayavaad upendra singh ji