Thursday, January 7, 2016

Chupke Chupke ;) Comments

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Chupke chupke ek baat Shuru ho gai..
Aankhein 2 se 4 ho gayi..
Fir baar baar Deedar hua..
Unke saamne aane ka har pal intezaar hua..
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Rishi Thakkar
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Upendra Singh Suman 17 January 2016

Chupke chupke ek baat Shuru ho gai.. Aankhein 2 se 4 ho gayi.. Fir baar baar Deedar hua.. Unke saamne aane ka har pal intezaar hua.. वाह! बहुत खूब

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Rishi Thakkar 18 January 2016

Bahut bahut dhanayavaad upendra singh ji

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Kavita Singh 14 January 2016

wah....kash sapne sach hote.....

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Rishi Thakkar 14 January 2016

Sapne agar Sach hote... To kaafi dard aasun naa hote.. Inkaa hona bhi zaroori hai.. Aye dost..thoda dard bhi hai zindigi ka hissa Warna jamta nahi zindagi mein utar chadhao ka kissa

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Abhilasha Bhatt 07 January 2016

An amazingly expressed emotions of love.....well narrated...thanx for sharing :)

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Rishi Thakkar 07 January 2016

Thanks for the appreciation :)

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Rajnish Manga 07 January 2016

Thanks for this amazing poem with a lovely narrative which carried the suspense till the very end. Please keep up the good work. I quote a few lines: Chupke chupke ek baat yu Shuru ho gayi.. Aankh khuli to jaana ki subha hui.. Sapna tha itna sundar soch k phir dil baith gaya..

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Rishi Thakkar 07 January 2016

Thanks sir..the narrative had to be prepared in a way the twist at the end gets a smile on the face :) Your comments mean a lot

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