Chugging Back In Time Comments

Your memories have brought us on a truly, spellbinding journey of Joy and some tears as your life unfolds with the sheer beauty of your words, that show a deep and powerful love, that soars with a mutual respect. Even though summer is long gone and memories flood back as you both ease into the winter of your lives, the light of your love shines still so bright!

Fantastic poem from your pen Valsa. Many many captivating lines adds charming beauty to this poem. I read it twice, I am not sure which is the most captivating lines, for me I loved reading each lines. The beautiful flow of poem make it awesome. Loved it.

the stairs of life we climbed Through what labyrinthine paths we travelled Beautiful poem of deep love reminiscing the past. With time love and life get aged like old wine. Every day should be more beautiful until the end. Best wishes.

Dotting the past is our pleasure......Nice poem and word power is also great and beautiful.

The poem here is a recollection of reminiscences par memories of a poetic hegira unto the pastures of a cosmic design and it is intricately analytical of a life on the tracks of time that alludes man`s very entity. Life of the kind in interception is embedded to that magical time and it remains consistent in amazing phases. Despite the agonising episodes which are sparingly intervened by the spells of delights and delusions, the saga will be continued till the final sunset, as you have said madam.

An outstanding piece with great imagery on wheels of time with reference to love's life........Valsa.............sweet reminiscence of nostalgic moments of life nicely expressed..........a 10 for the great piece

WOW' - so lovely a write up this is that I love to go on reading it, echoing and ringing with beautiful memories..... I'm spellbound.

This is a very fine write taking us back in a time capsule full of emotions and imagery. Great.

Wheel of time is rotating, but love being at its center rotates with a maximum velocity that is why love is the most powerful feeling and emotion. It is associated with the immortal soul. Souls once joined are never separated. In fact you and your love both are traveling in the same train but in the different compartments. Destination is the same. At the eternal last station, I hope you will be with your love and I shall be wishing you a happy re-union for ever.

I would like to (not flattering) add my sincere words, the poetess love to be greenish.... Memories so green linger my dear As though it all happened just days ago how beautiful her views and lovable days Had we sown the seeds of love Watering them with our saline tears

First of all it will adorn my poem list! what a play of words! the multiple and varied imagery shows that yes Time is an unbound infinite entity, quite difficult to have a grip at it, not difficult but a dream, that is the probable reason for the variety of imagery that you have used here, as in the title we find a different analogy...chugging back in time, rolling wheels for train imagery then it turns to the swift flight, the translucent montage of past vision, sometimes an unsteady toddler Crawled away on hands and legs, the exploration of life, hand in hand, stairs of life, and then the allegory of the seasons Life presented us with a mixed bag We have watched the death of spring We have bore the heat of summer, Seen the leaves drop in the mellowing autumn And the chilly shroud of winter is about to veil... Kindly receive my humble but strong appreciation for writing a very fine poem not to leave the emotions that run under the poem so tender, so fine...the image and the feel of the final sunset makes one speechless...it is a beautiful poem!

the opening lines how aptly sets the mood for this wondrous retrace down the life's path.

first two lines great...........a poem that walk around memories.......to some facts of life.......like it...its marvelous