Tuesday, March 3, 2009

Chubby Boy. Comments

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his name is chubby boy,
his 14 years old and can't let go of his favorite toy,
he loves ice cream and chocolate,
give the fat boy food and he can eat al of it,
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JOSE MURGUIA
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* Naphright * 14 February 2010

yes, it is sad but true, that at times we seek refuge and comfort from other sources, that will only give us temporary rellief. and if we keep on leaning on those sources we will have negative consequences. i feel chubby boy!

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Miranda Van Yperen 19 August 2009

HAHAHA i really like it :)

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Mona Martinez 15 August 2009

nicely said, i loved every word you wrote. very sad though.

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lisa moore 11 August 2009

no matter what any one says about this poem it is brilliant.... the world is getting bigger and bigger as the fast food industries continue to make more mcdonalds resturants... statistics say that 1 in 3 americans are over weight.... thats horrible.. it makes them sad that they are over weight but they continue to eat unhealthy and do nothing about it....but there are the very few over weight people who do something about there weight and i am happy for them... any way great poem! ! ! luv lisa xo : -)

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brittany 09 March 2009

dude i dont care what anyone else thinks that was pretty hilarious... nice job! ! and thanks for sharing! are you a comedian? if not... you should be.

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