Chrystallised Genes Comments

Lovely poem with a lot of truth. Nice job, Susan.

I like the name. Nice little poem to read with its shifting rhyme scheme and simple words. Not my type exactly but Im sure a lot of people could enjoy this one.

Love, passion and intimacy.........................................yielding something, something not really wanted. Yet, that is how the world is formed. Nice way to squeeze it in a poem. Well done, Susie!

It is natural for two to come together with passion to create a future. Its an excellent thing. Great thought drwan fron deep mind

Very well done. So true.

Chrystallized is a misspelling; perhaps it is deliberate as it serves its purpose of grabbing attention...Yes, indeed, lovers are often selfish and short sighted; they don't foresee the consequences of their actions..

a sweet melody of child birth.... a bit funny too