Thursday, September 22, 2005

Chrystallised Genes Comments

Rating: 4.7

They came together in love,
chrystallised genes.
They did not know,
that a baby might grow
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Susan Alldred Lugton
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Bernard Snyder 13 November 2014

Lovely poem with a lot of truth. Nice job, Susan.

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Kay Staley 13 November 2014

I like the name. Nice little poem to read with its shifting rhyme scheme and simple words. Not my type exactly but Im sure a lot of people could enjoy this one.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 13 November 2014

Love, passion and intimacy.........................................yielding something, something not really wanted. Yet, that is how the world is formed. Nice way to squeeze it in a poem. Well done, Susie!

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Babatunde Aremu 13 November 2014

It is natural for two to come together with passion to create a future. Its an excellent thing. Great thought drwan fron deep mind

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Kim Barney 13 November 2014

Very well done. So true.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 13 November 2014

Chrystallized is a misspelling; perhaps it is deliberate as it serves its purpose of grabbing attention...Yes, indeed, lovers are often selfish and short sighted; they don't foresee the consequences of their actions..

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Xelam Kan™ 13 November 2013

a sweet melody of child birth.... a bit funny too

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Susan Alldred Lugton

Susan Alldred Lugton

Dunedin New Zealand
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