Tuesday, April 6, 2010

Chrysalises Comments

Rating: 2.9

The little girl, though very ill,
Went out one morning
To wander, with faltering footsteps,
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Jose Asuncion Silva
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 26 March 2017

An endearing poem of a golden butterfly, golden fields, a little girl with mountain flowers. Most effectively portrayed by the poet.

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John S 26 March 2017

At birth a cattipellar imparted Cacooned within a heart of gold Upon death her soul departed And a beautiful butterfly arose

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Georgie Hilderman 26 March 2017

beautifully crafted poem, gorgeous words

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So sad a poem and yet triumphant in spirit...beautifully written.I wish the poet was still alive so that I could tell him I'm sorry for your loss..

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Ash Frost 26 March 2017

beautiful explain of feeling given by poet

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Tom Allport 26 March 2017

a sad poem of a child's death yet with the hope her soul will be released to a happier place?

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 March 2017

Newly freed soul! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Payal Priya 26 March 2017

Death is the beginning of something greater; something intangible and ethereal. A beautiful poem contrasting images of death and life only to bring a beautiful confluence at the end.Thanks for sharing☺

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 March 2017

A question that is very difficult to answer. What is the destination of the soul when it leaves the body. Nice poem. Loved it.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 26 March 2017

Awesome.... Thanks for posting....

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