Chrysalis Comments
Chrysalis
My minds' got more bodies than graveyards,
Tears that fall like atom bombs
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You use some very powerful metaphors and similes here. Thanks for posting this. This appears to be the first poem that you have posted on this site, so welcome to Poem Hunter!
Vivid and electric imagery expressed in your poem. 'More bodies than graveyards, feathers born of ashes, and and songs like chimes in a windstorm' evoke strong images and ideas. Thanks for sharing.
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7/25/2025 5:45:29 AM # 1.0.0
Her song like chimes in a windstorm, singing the beauty of the destruction. No unnecessary words. Perfect!