Wednesday, November 30, 2016

Chrysalis Comments

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Chrysalis

My minds' got more bodies than graveyards,
Tears that fall like atom bombs
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Tor Silvertongue
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R Soos 08 December 2016

Her song like chimes in a windstorm, singing the beauty of the destruction. No unnecessary words. Perfect!

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Kim Barney 01 December 2016

You use some very powerful metaphors and similes here. Thanks for posting this. This appears to be the first poem that you have posted on this site, so welcome to Poem Hunter!

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Pamela Sinicrope 30 November 2016

Vivid and electric imagery expressed in your poem. 'More bodies than graveyards, feathers born of ashes, and and songs like chimes in a windstorm' evoke strong images and ideas. Thanks for sharing.

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