Thursday, December 10, 2015

Chrysalis Comments

Rating: 5.0

Incongruous creeper of star crossed fate
Muted dreamer with a living to tolerate
Swanking too compensate the lack of luster
A sycophantic wish delivering a note of disaster
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Norman F. Santos
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Mihaela Pirjol 14 January 2016

Another greatly written poem of yours! I'll ponder on for some time!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 December 2015

A failure to acquaint the puissant enemy Eternally ensnared in a cosset of turgidity...Very deeply envision amazing poem shared here. Wisely drafted.10

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Manonton Dalan 10 December 2015

paroparong siyudad sa kalsada lalakad lakad may ngiti, may sayang tingkad sa ginip nakababad

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Norman F. Santos

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