Wednesday, March 8, 2006

Chronocide Comments

Rating: 4.0

With every moment passing,
I die a little more.
I'm deader now today,
than I've ever been before.
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James Atkins
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Anna Russell 24 March 2006

I agree with Brigid - every word carefully placed and a very enjoyable read. Hugs Anna xxx

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Bridgid Patrick 08 March 2006

Good rhythm and meter..much enjoyed...warm regards x

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