come to me, christ..
walking together..
on the rivers of sky..
on the light wings..
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A beautiful prayer poem for all mankine. Very touching. Voted 10
You've had alot of great works in your hand, there is creativity in your words. I like this!
Come to me love the line. Your poem is full of love just like Christmas day. Love it.......
This poems express the wish of a human heart for the Savior of the World to come in al of his glory with those blessing that is needed by humans on earth. Bestowing all the grace and mercy upon them as he see that is necessary. Jesus is everything. It is a prayer in request of a need to be fulfilled.
A very lovely verse celebrating the beauty and love that empowers the Christmas spirit. You seem to have the gift of saying things in a most wonderful way. Hope your new year is filled with inspiriation.
A beautiful write on Chritmas, narration of the Grace of Almighty
..and make them santa clause..of wishes..n love.. ..well written..beautifully crafted...
nice write, i loved the last lines..... and happy new year to you
Really very beautiful with such a nice, natural flowing rhythm, with some very moving poetic sentiment, loved the lines 'on the light wings..of loving angels..' Happy New Year to you ahmed.
an apt poem esp. at this time of the year. scent of saint mary i liked that one.
As I see it a veritable encyclopaedia of faith in the creator brought back to the human level via santa clause. Thank you Ahmed and a Happy 2012 to You & Yours`
The ending was killing...brilliant. Come to me christ, and bless all human, making em all at the same time santa claus of wishes and love. Boy...this is gud....kudos.