Saturday, December 24, 2011

Christmaspoem Comments

Rating: 4.3

come to me, christ..
walking together..
on the rivers of sky..
on the light wings..
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ahmed khaled
COMMENTS
Okoye Charles Chukwudi 27 February 2012

The ending was killing...brilliant. Come to me christ, and bless all human, making em all at the same time santa claus of wishes and love. Boy...this is gud....kudos.

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Walterrean Salley 28 January 2012

A beautiful prayer poem for all mankine. Very touching. Voted 10

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Heyyou Boy 10 January 2012

Heart felt and impressive. Great write Ahmed

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Oladehinde J Ibikunle 07 January 2012

You've had alot of great works in your hand, there is creativity in your words. I like this!

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Young Church Poetry 05 January 2012

Come to me love the line. Your poem is full of love just like Christmas day. Love it.......

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Carlotta Russell 04 January 2012

This poems express the wish of a human heart for the Savior of the World to come in al of his glory with those blessing that is needed by humans on earth. Bestowing all the grace and mercy upon them as he see that is necessary. Jesus is everything. It is a prayer in request of a need to be fulfilled.

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Nicky Hill 03 January 2012

thats really lovely heart warming happy new year to you.

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Elizabeth Wesley 03 January 2012

A very lovely verse celebrating the beauty and love that empowers the Christmas spirit. You seem to have the gift of saying things in a most wonderful way. Hope your new year is filled with inspiriation.

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Santosh Sharma 03 January 2012

A beautiful write on Chritmas, narration of the Grace of Almighty

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Champs Ulysses Cabinatan 03 January 2012

very beautiful poem.

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Rigzin Namgyal 02 January 2012

..and make them santa clause..of wishes..n love.. ..well written..beautifully crafted...

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Areeba Sohail 02 January 2012

nice poem for christmas!

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Heyyou Boy 01 January 2012

A good christmas poem Ahmed. Keep up the good work

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Nishtha Datta 01 January 2012

nice write, i loved the last lines..... and happy new year to you

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Dave Walker 31 December 2011

A great poem for christmas. A great write.

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Cosmic Dreamer 31 December 2011

Very well written... Well done...

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Declan O Reilly 31 December 2011

Really very beautiful with such a nice, natural flowing rhythm, with some very moving poetic sentiment, loved the lines 'on the light wings..of loving angels..' Happy New Year to you ahmed.

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Dead Leaf 31 December 2011

great poem...really nice

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Neetha Sasidharan 31 December 2011

an apt poem esp. at this time of the year. scent of saint mary i liked that one.

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George Bernard Hough 31 December 2011

As I see it a veritable encyclopaedia of faith in the creator brought back to the human level via santa clause. Thank you Ahmed and a Happy 2012 to You & Yours`

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