Friday, January 9, 2009

Christmases Comments

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The pain in your heart only hope severs
The look in their eyes only truth betrays
The thoughts in their heart only the heart can hide
But what news has the third eyes conveyed?
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Sathyanarayana M V S 17 January 2009

Stunning, surprising and thought-provoking. But, still I think this poem could have been pruned into a shorter version, with more emphasis on certain things you had projected.

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Nichola Okoro

Nichola Okoro

Kaduna Nigeria
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