Friday, December 19, 2008

**** Christmas Without You Comments

Rating: 4.3

C - Christmas carols oh blazon,
unearth the eve of torn images that churn

H - Hitch hiking each moment,
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
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Adriana Veloso 11 January 2009

we always want to be with who we love on christmas day! ! ! but most of the time we can't (like me) But all we want for christemas is the one! ! ! and we don´t care about the presents underneath the Christmas tree we just want him/her for our own and this is too sad adriana veloso

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Dolan Doran 02 January 2009

interesting..never thought of Christmas that way....it's creative...lovely.

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Moushumi moushumi 31 December 2008

It should reach to one of 500 poems. This style is innovative. Happy New year.

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Sierra Love 29 December 2008

Wow this poem was really beautiful....you have such a creative way of looking at Christmas....never though of it that way. Great job, I really love it.

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Mimi Fakhira 29 December 2008

Creative poem... a successful write. I totally love it! Have a great New Year!

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Egi David Perdana 27 December 2008

happy christmas my pal

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Little Hatila ;) 26 December 2008

'Merry Christmas to you Without you, I feel blue' very sad, but hope she will be there soon....10 Hataw

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Subbaraman N V 24 December 2008

I am there! Merry Christmas to you and the New Year too!

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Dr Kamran Haider 23 December 2008

Bro, you are really master of words... Merry Christmas to you... God bless you

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Costa Anakiev 23 December 2008

well done! it's nearly an acrostic. read my new 'Writing to Santa again'. merry x-mas to you.

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Daniel Aguero 23 December 2008

nice poem.. anyways merry christmas to u..

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Beautifully Unknown 21 December 2008

very nice poem! i love it very strong message!

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<font color =fusha>Amy 21 December 2008

this poem shows a very strong message very oxymoron nice

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Jean Avendaño 21 December 2008

Nice poem.. I can relate to it. How I wish to be with my special someone on that special day. God bless.

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Milad Ghezello 21 December 2008

This poem is very nice. I enjoy reading this poem.

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Maxim Muyu 21 December 2008

It's so lovely and the style is so unique and very artful.Great Writings.

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Vinod Kumar 21 December 2008

Dear Poet Well Written Treat for Holy `X`Mas I found a delicious Cake and a Cute Cup of Wine in Your Hands for your Beloved Honey, It was a very Good Treat for the Holy Season, Thanks for sharing the Great Art, Thank You.

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Little Morning Star 21 December 2008

Christmas is the time we gather with our beloved.. beautiful acrostic poem..

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Kite Remedy 21 December 2008

This definitely a magnificent work.. So silent I can capture the sadness beyond the words.. Beautiful, truly..

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Aijaz Asif 21 December 2008

a marvellous write bro and yes their's no happiness in any occasion if the one we love is not with us to share....thanks for sharing 10+++ rgds asif

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