Thursday, April 17, 2008

Christmas Without Dad Comments

Rating: 5.0

I want my Dad! i started to cry
why did he have to go and die?
Christmas without him is not the same
i need someone to take the blame!
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COMMENTS
Ron Flowers 28 December 2008

A wonderful poem. It expresses your sadness and pain, but also your familys spirit of togetherness. Wishing you a happy 2009 and beyond. Ron

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Bonnie Collins 28 December 2008

Bob, how very well you constructed a very painfull write about losing your dad at Christmas... This trully brought a tear to my eye. Very good indeed.... Have a happy healthy new year Bonnie

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 24 December 2008

that must have hurt when you wrote it- lovely-10

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Bob Blackwell 10 October 2008

Bob, you have related this so well, you brought a tear. Wonderful writing the pain came through. Thank you Bob

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Bob Gibson

Bob Gibson

Billingham County Durham
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