Friday, November 16, 2007
Christmas Wish List Comments
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What do I want for Christmas?
I will see if I can explain;
It's really nothing fancy,
but it's also nothing plain.
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Marilyn Lott
16 November 2007
What a sweet and romantic poem, Dwayne. I'm sure you'll get exactly what you want for Christmas! I love it! Marilyn
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7/22/2025 12:29:52 AM # 1.0.0
This one is awesome. I really know what this feels like, especially when my girlfriend asks what i want for Christmas. One suggestion, on the line, 'You see it's not money' i would put a comma after 'see' and change 'it's' to 'it is' I think it 1. adds a pause to reflect and 2. at gives it a nicer flow. other than that it was very nice. -Paz