Sunday, November 30, 2008

Christmas Wish List Comments

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parents running around frantic for a tree
waiting for the last moment so that their children do not see
decorating the tree when their children have been put to sleep
putting the lights, garland and icicles upon the tree.
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louis rams
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So very thoughtful i love the imagenation in this poem i see this so clearly you did great.. Krista

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Linda Winchell 01 December 2008

Now this is the best I think you've written yet! Bravo! ! ! I have a couple of suggestions and will privately email you with them. Great write! Ten! ! ! Sir Louis! Linda

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