Sunday, December 2, 2007

Christmas Tree Comments

Rating: 5.0

I made you a Christmas tree because
I knew you wouldn't bother.

I picked the branch myself,
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YURI DURAAN
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David Desantis 08 May 2008

Sad Yuri, I'm sorry this feeling of love not returned....you seem like a great person though, and very giving. Oh yeah, and an excellent writer too

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Richard Navarro 09 April 2008

thanks for the comment. This poem strikes a delicate chord in me. finely woven!

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Jemarie Ragudo 13 December 2007

This poem almost made me cry. The sadness it created is so intense. The words were simple but the flow of thought was very overpowering. I give you 10+.

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Gershon Hepner 09 December 2007

A very moving poem. Your lover didn't get the Christmas tree you had thought he deserved, but he did get the poem he surely did deserve. And so have all your readers.

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YURI DURAAN

YURI DURAAN

South Africa
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