Monday, December 8, 2014

Christmas Shopping Comments

Rating: 4.5

In a rush to buy her present
I tripped upon a stone
I gashed my leg and cut my arm
And hurt my funny bone
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Phil Soar
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Tom Billsborough 05 April 2016

It's a bit late for reading Christmas poems but I'm glad I read yours. Its jaunty rhythm brought me to live at this ridiculously early hour 5.20am! I read your two previous poems re Christmas too and was very impressed with your sense of rhythm. And the humour isn't bad either. Tom Billsborough

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