Monday, December 28, 2009

*christmas Miracle* Comments

Rating: 3.0

Jingle bells jingle bells jingle all the way;
poor children are gazing at the stars as they walk their way.

Christ is all about love and care,
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 18 February 2016

All your poems are superb-thanks for sharing.

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John Knight 29 December 2009

Hi Elsee Angel - I am honoured to be the fisrt tocomment on this lovely poem. It has excellent Structure ans Rhyme and a beautiful message. I score it a full TEN. Christmas is about a child JESUS the Incarnate Son of God - born to die - to redeem the whole Human Race. The Lamb of God who took away the sin of the World when He died for us on the Cross in AD33. Christmas is also for all children in the World - especially those who are hungry and abused. Those of us who are blessed materially can be blessed spiritually if we give to the poor. The last verse is very poeitive Elsee just like your own attitude to life. '2010 WILL be filled with Glitter & Sparkle' and - as you say- it is all because of the Miracle of Christmas'. Love you in Poetry - JOHN X

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