Christmas Magic Comments

I enjoyed this poem a lot, but a few tiny flaws kept me from enjoying it even more. You have misspelled WITHOUT on lines two and three, and should capitalize Christmas on lines one, six, seven, ten, and eleven.

Cold freezing snow, but look at the snowflakes carefully how they bold the symmetrical beauty even if frozen curse, Look at the snow when it fall over the sky...see how they cant melt as a cloud's tears but as solid ball..if you frozen your sad you will see miracle, like a symmetrical beauty, from heart...it is an art to thankful of what we have. Christmas magic actually has no magic, no magic dust or workable magic wand from santa or whatever...the magic you think it happen is because it from heart, you said you spread love and peace to all...believe it, as they will return to you as the loves back in bundle..you give and people will share for u..So smile, there's always people care for you...we are a big community, a big family where genetic pools only different and variety but in soul we are similar..pure and care each other, if we all believe..._Unwritten Soul

You spread your love and peace to everyone, of course they will return back to u..now you got many people around to care, to celebrate...so jingle your smile it wont dies jingle not to cry...Be thankful Cosmic, lot of people are having worse life than you, than us for a single hope keep ring the bell of smile, there must be a way to reach a new day, a new day where all your wish to be true...we all here for you Cosmic! _Unwritten Soul

Wow! your poem is amazing...what you talk about here is real.

I actually have many thoughts on this poem .... But will just say you captured the feeling so well -So, in one word: Brilliant. Well, I have to add that I think its an amazing poem!

A great poem, christmas can do this to you. I've spent christmas feeling like this more than once in the past. A great write.