Hello, hello,
That's what we say,
When Christmas Eve comes on its way.
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Yes, Christmas is a lovely time filling every heart with joy! ! This is a wonderful poem coming from a young girl of ur age...I see a lot of talent in you! ! Keep writing! ! All best wishes! !
It's amazing how your mind is illuminated with so much delight. you grab me and pull me down your poems as if saying, come on! let's run and play sliding down the hill on a piece of carton slider. I enjoy your poems.
I love Christmas. I love the joy and celebration in this poem.
Beautifully written poem. Enjoyed reading it. Looking forward more poems from you dear Meriam.10+
Hello, Meriem! Let me congratulate you on this well-crafted poem. You have achieved to convey to readers that lovely atmosphere of magic for children's wishes by Christmas... These are sweet children's memories indeed. Keep up your poem writing and stories!
What a beautiful vision of Christmas time. Something that finally finds that lost spirit. Keep writing. You've got great stuff kid! ! !
A time where woderous things can happen and horror of the world stops for just one day, but it's at least a start. Lovely piece Meriam a nice reminisce. Regards. Craig
This is a very joyful poem, Miriam. A great tribute to a most joyous time of year. Thanks, Richard
That is really good. Great texture.! 0 out of 10 for me! ! Please continue to surprise us all, with your amazing work.
Pretty good for a Christmas poem, I don't usually like them, but this is one of the more finer ones I've read.
wow! the poem is full of life and its so lovely. made me feel joyful, thank you very much for sharing.
Your pen flows so smoothly, like there is no effort. Yes you are indeed talented; no IFS ANDS or BUTS about that! Santa seems a long way off just now, as they are saying here we are under a heat dome! Maybe I should write a poem about that.. smiles, Patti
good write...others here are all expert commenters..they said and appreciated ur work better as me..
NICE... i like the way u made it rhyme... and yeah u r unbelievablyand incredibly talented for ur age..! ! Keep going girl! ! ! ! ..(do checkout my poem too...)
Lovely poem Meriam. Very well described. May Santa grant you a wonderful present. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. God bless.