Thursday, July 28, 2011

Christmas Is On Its Way Comments

Rating: 4.5

Hello, hello,
That's what we say,
When Christmas Eve comes on its way.
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Meriam Joseph
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Cyclopseven R 09 December 2015

Lovely poem Meriam. Very well described. May Santa grant you a wonderful present. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. God bless.

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Valsa George 09 July 2012

Yes, Christmas is a lovely time filling every heart with joy! ! This is a wonderful poem coming from a young girl of ur age...I see a lot of talent in you! ! Keep writing! ! All best wishes! !

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Leon Villegas 28 May 2012

It's amazing how your mind is illuminated with so much delight. you grab me and pull me down your poems as if saying, come on! let's run and play sliding down the hill on a piece of carton slider. I enjoy your poems.

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Stella Mary 30 December 2011

I love Christmas. I love the joy and celebration in this poem.

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Zainab Zaheen 16 August 2011

i love Christmas.. i love the joy that's in the poem..

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Minu Alex 14 August 2011

A joyful poem for the joyous christmas! Nice

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Ravi Sathasivam 13 August 2011

Beautifully written poem. Enjoyed reading it. Looking forward more poems from you dear Meriam.10+

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Yoseph Lupu 07 August 2011

Your writing is amazing, and I wish you good luck!

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Michaela Cook 06 August 2011

This a very charming, keep up the good work!

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Maria C. Pires Costa 06 August 2011

Hello, Meriem! Let me congratulate you on this well-crafted poem. You have achieved to convey to readers that lovely atmosphere of magic for children's wishes by Christmas... These are sweet children's memories indeed. Keep up your poem writing and stories!

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Tina Mack 05 August 2011

What a beautiful vision of Christmas time. Something that finally finds that lost spirit. Keep writing. You've got great stuff kid! ! !

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Craig Anderson 05 August 2011

A time where woderous things can happen and horror of the world stops for just one day, but it's at least a start. Lovely piece Meriam a nice reminisce. Regards. Craig

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C.R. Clark 05 August 2011

This is a very joyful poem, Miriam. A great tribute to a most joyous time of year. Thanks, Richard

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ItalianxRainbowx Ninjaz 04 August 2011

That is really good. Great texture.! 0 out of 10 for me! ! Please continue to surprise us all, with your amazing work.

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Stefanie Fontker 04 August 2011

Pretty good for a Christmas poem, I don't usually like them, but this is one of the more finer ones I've read.

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Ency Bearis 04 August 2011

nice one, well expressed poetically

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Young Church Poetry 04 August 2011

wow! the poem is full of life and its so lovely. made me feel joyful, thank you very much for sharing.

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Patti Masterman 03 August 2011

Your pen flows so smoothly, like there is no effort. Yes you are indeed talented; no IFS ANDS or BUTS about that! Santa seems a long way off just now, as they are saying here we are under a heat dome! Maybe I should write a poem about that.. smiles, Patti

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Allemagne Roßmann 03 August 2011

good write...others here are all expert commenters..they said and appreciated ur work better as me..

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Teenu Thomas 03 August 2011

NICE... i like the way u made it rhyme... and yeah u r unbelievablyand incredibly talented for ur age..! ! Keep going girl! ! ! ! ..(do checkout my poem too...)

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