Tuesday, December 12, 2006

Christmas Glee Comments

Rating: 4.7

I’ve got a jingle in my jangle here at Christmas
As my smile runs for miles round to see
I’ve got a jingle in my jangle here at Christmas
As I’m running round to show my Christmas glee
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Paul Moosberg
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Herbert Nehrlich1 14 December 2006

Very nice! Bravo! . Third stanza needs the apostrophe removed in carols. This is quite original as it injects with such mischievous surprise, humour and joy. It is a very uplifting poem, sure to create enthusiasm and anticipation of a great time. H

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Eila Mahima Jaipaul 13 December 2006

you've captured the season in words and rhythm...

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Jessica Roberts 13 December 2006

this poem is a wonderful poem and you captured christmas very well

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