Sunday, December 3, 2006

Christmas Eve Candlelight Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mine eyes have seen the Christmas of the many years before
The children lay asleep in bed, the presents on the floor
The tree decorated with its many twinkling lights
The snow that slowly falls outside like Angel dust at night
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David Lovell 03 December 2006

I like how when the poem first shifts from the peace within to the problems without there is a temporary interruption of 'perfect' rhymes.

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