Tuesday, December 25, 2007

Christmas, Day After Comments

Rating: 4.8

The roads are unusually silent
Like a tuneless music room
I felt so deaf to listen to nothing
Aimlessly I am drifted to no where
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Ayi Escalona
COMMENTS
Walterrean Salley 10 November 2009

Nostalgic. And nothing's normal during the special celebration. Beautiful poem, beautifully written. Thanks 10

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Alyssa Molai 09 November 2009

an insperational poem

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C Toebe 31 October 2009

Poignant and heartfelt realism. good read.

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Greenwolfe 1962 10 July 2008

I thought there was a lot said here about the day after Christmas. Buit I think that more was revealed about the writers true feelings about the celebration. GW62

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Carolyn Sears 07 January 2008

I enjoyed this write.. God Bless! ! Carolyn

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Melvin Banggollay 07 January 2008

pare kumusta ka na jan Well, kahit pasado na nais pa rin kitang batiin ng merri x mas at manigong bagong taon. maganda ang kantha mong ito Puno ng diwa ng kapaskuhan. salamat at nawa'y nasa mabuti kang kalagayan lagi. God bless, melvin

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John Nightingale 28 December 2007

Very Enjoyable. Thanks.

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Ewigi Liebe 27 December 2007

Beautiful write Kapatid...I missed it this year: (but anyway still living so thats the best part.

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Patrice James 26 December 2007

I was once in PI and celebrate Christmas and new year...I enjoy it a lot diff. from other country...great msg. thou thanks.

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Francis Duggan 26 December 2007

Good poem you've written here Ariel one can imagine the scene in your descriptive verse keep those good poems coming

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