Wednesday, December 6, 2006

Christmas Day Comments

Rating: 4.9

Christmas is so merry, at this special time of year
Christmas is extraordinary, as long as you are here

Inside my heart I’ll jump and dance, excited just to see
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Paul Moosberg
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Herbert Nehrlich1 14 December 2006

I suggest you take the stumbles out as shown below: Inside my heart I’ll jump and dance, excited just to see The sparkling beauty in your glance, upon this Christmas eve... Just a thought but it's a good, pleasant poem. H

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Eila Mahima Jaipaul 13 December 2006

it is very much filled with christmas hope....

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Terry Donovan 13 December 2006

Very nice, happy, atmospheric poem - just the way Christmas should be (and once was!)

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Jessica Roberts 13 December 2006

this is really good poem and you captured it very well

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