Thursday, December 24, 2009

Christmas Comments

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You walk into the lighted up house.
Boom the smell hits you baking food and the nosie shocks you.
Family is gathered around the table smiling and singing
'jingle bells jingle all the way'
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Yulissa Fregoso
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Marcus Mckinley 28 July 2010

you have captured the essence of Christmas very well. i sense some great talent here. keep up the good works. marcus

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John Knight 25 December 2009

Hi Yulissa - Nice Poem full of the Joys & Smells & Tastes of Christmas. Tamales very Mexican - a unique taste of Old Mexico. I last enjoyed them in Mexico after Midnight Mass in puebla in 2006 - awesome. The Family - the Presents - Going home again - Christmas goes almost as quickly as it comes. There will be another one next year. Lots of things change in this World Yulissa - but Christmas is always the same - especially a Mexican Christmas! Love you in Poetry - JOHN

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