Christmas 2 - Cheer My Path O God! Comments
O God! You have swept down into the brown earth,
With a sudden sheet of white snowy glitz,
A silvery sheen covered like a white magic carpet,
A heavenly sheet of lustre and magnificence.
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Awesome poem in which the snowy glitz compared to a msfuc carpet. Fruits flowers and leaves covered l with snow like fairies. These words in the, poem has been penned with di much of warmth. Congrats.
Nature has never sounded so beautiful before....was imagining every word penned. Awesome
white snowy glitz.... like a white magic carpet, trees and leaves.... look like frozen fairies.... //....This is an awesome scenery created by the poet with her hand-picked words with warmth of the heart. Moreover, the poem transforms the entire atmosphere into 'A heavenly sheet of lustre and magnificence'. It also holds a very sublime prayer 'O God! Do cheer my path with your love and guidance'. Thanks, Geeta ji, for sharing this lovely piece of poetry.
You have an eye for beauty, Geeta! You find it in things great and small! Tis easy to wax eloquent about spring but it takes sheer talent like yours to weave such a luscious poem about the icy cold! ! ! ! Top marks!
Mesmerizing manifestations of nature in celebration of the advent of Christmas have been captured in the special Christmas carol. Thanks for sharing.5 stars for the cheerful presentation.
" As I walk through the icy walks of life Shaking and shivering " , praying God Makes the poem a divergent experience
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