Sunday, July 29, 2007

Christianity Comments

Rating: 4.5

She bows her head
Her eyes are shut
Her hands are cupped
Nothing is there
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Amera Andersen 30 July 2007

This is beautiful and the flow is smooth. My only suggestion is that you should always capitalize the worc 'God'. Well done! Love, Amera ♥

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