Monday, August 25, 2014

Choti Si Ghazal Comments

Rating: 5.0

Khuda ko dhoondh len ge pehle insan dhoondh lene do,
Mujhe afsanae Adam ka unuan dhoondh lene do.
Mujhe maloom hay manzil to Hawa thi jo ab bhi hay,
Yeh mitti jisne goondhi thi woh arman dhoondh lene do.
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M Asim Nehal 21 September 2015

Kahan per gum hue wade khan per kho gaeen qasmen, Woh jisko tum bhula baithe woh paiman dhoondh lene do........................Wow wow Wow 100 on 10 for this khayal.........

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Geetha Jayakumar 24 October 2014

Fantastic lines....... Khuda ko dhoondh len ge pehle insan dhoondh lene do, Thoughtful write. Loved it. Shukriya....

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Ramesh Rai 12 September 2014

bahut hi meethi gazal hai. invite you to read Nilam aur Nazm

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 12 September 2014

In India ASHOK CHAKRDHAR wrote Ek Neta khin kho gaya hai, , dhondo kahin wo insaan to nahin ho gayaa hai..while going through it came in my mind nice

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Akhtar Jawad 25 August 2014

Mujhe maloom hay manzil to Hawa thi jo ab bhi hay, Yeh mitti jisne goondhi thi woh arman dhoondh lene do. A beatiful ghazal.

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