Wednesday, April 9, 2008

Chosing My Battles Comments

Rating: 4.5

tears chimed silver tracks
down cheeks all wrinkled
with emotion
heart, no longer lonely,
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Midnight Clarity
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Original Unknown Girl 09 April 2008

You pack so much into this poem MC, that it shouts at me in one constant stream of consciousness. I love it, it's so frantic and I feel your pain and your commonsense both shouting from each corner of the punching ring. Brilliant. HG: -) xx

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