Chorus Of Eden Spirits Comments

Hearken, oh hearken! ye shall hearken surely For years and years, The noise beside you, dripping coldly, purely, Of spirits’ tears. A very fine poem. tony

'Voice throbs in verse' - a gem of the crown.

We are but orphaned spirits left in Eden A time ago: God gave us golden cups, and we were bidden To feed you so.../// beautiful chorus of Eden; all thru holiness feelings

By the foregone ye shall discern the coming Through eyelids shut" A great poem and equally touching.

An interesting form. I may use it sometime.

Elizabeth wrote this poem with a uneque approach.i really enjoyed the read to the end.