Tuesday, November 8, 2005

Chorus Line Comments

Rating: 4.8

A string of street lamps,
their heads stretching out across the road.

On the top of one, a row of birds sit.
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 21 March 2008

Lovely write, they used to sit on the street light outside our house too. I think they were just trying to keep their feet warm though! Andrew x

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Duncan Wyllie 10 March 2006

I think that they will carry on singing either way.Love Duncan

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Simon Whild 14 November 2005

A nice vignette, Ernestine.

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Uriah Hamilton 09 November 2005

With Raynette, it brought a smile.

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Raynette Eitel 08 November 2005

I like this one, Ernestine. It captures the scene and makes me laugh. Raynette

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