Chopping To Cook Comments

mind is mind as the leader of life directs all alpha to omega of life it cooks according to realistic life to serve the hungry heart!

Chopping to cook is a delightful poem that highlights the daily routine. As long as we live, it is important to be practical whatever the mind says. Fungal mind Shrinking esophagus Stomach is deprived Of its hourly wages..........super verse! ......5 Stars

This is rhasphody. Magnificent metaphorical play. The cooking mind amidst all. Beautiful.

Excellent, no two thoughts while cooking specially while cutting vegetables, I see humour, philosophy and witty/wise decorative words.10**********

Let me quote from this lovely poem- - As thoughts are chopping My mind Knife is cutting My finger As my finger is Crying red My mind is treating My red thoughts

It is a great write, well crafted poem - - While mind is busy in thoughts, hands busy in cooking - -The distraction cuts the finger- -The hurt has to be healed by Self as there is no one else to help.To my poem list.

''No celestial being Will descend To cook for you' - these lines are saddening to me, as these remind me of the hard work my mom did to keep us fed. No celestial being helped her either! Thank you, dear poet, for your thoughtful and thought provoking poem.

This is so sad, if you cut your finger and it cries with blood during chopping. You should be very careful with magnetic mind. Attentiveness will help you in avoiding you such trouble. We hope, celestial being will help you to recover soon from cut. This poem is very brilliantly penned...5 stars..