Saturday, October 5, 2019

Chopinian Lament Comments

Rating: 5.0

This Autumn I mourn
the fear of a leaf
who paid to October
a fistful of days
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Magdalena Biela
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Bharati Nayak 19 February 2020

This Autumn I mourn the fear of a leaf who paid to October a fistful of days to dye her hair from green to fire unaware that the dyeing brings death. - - - - - An amazing poem that expresses the grief and sadness of heart.

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Magdalena Biela 19 February 2020

It is an honor and a privilege to chosen POEM OF THE DAY so I thank Poem Hunter for everything they do and I thank YOU, my friends, for your kind thoughts and words! ! ! Blessed be! ! ! Magdalena..

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Harley White 19 February 2020

This is a really wonderful poem, with memorable phrases, like " a fistful of days" and " the dyeing brings death" , with a profound theme... well-chosen for poem of the day...

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Magdalena Biela 19 February 2020

Thank you heartily for your kind thoughts...

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Mahtab Bangalee 19 February 2020

I like this poem; the full of lament for the love though neglected //

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Magdalena Biela 19 February 2020

Understanding ones words and thoughts is a form of art...Thank you!

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Mahtab Bangalee 19 February 2020

oh the love sad love avoided though waiting leaf after leaf springtime after springtime thousands of negligence makes the eyes withered leaves yet love sitting on the path of waiting, on the coming back path of kissing on rosy lips......

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Magdalena Biela 19 February 2020

Beautiful...

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Rajnish Manga 19 February 2020

Excellent metaphorical poem- an interpretation of life.... and death. Thanks.

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Magdalena Biela 19 February 2020

Thank YOU! ! !

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Adrian Flett 19 February 2020

Great perception and feelings in this poem

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 February 2020

A well composed poem of the day. Congrats on your featured piece, dear Ma’am Maria Magdalena.....10+++

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Kostas Lagos 05 October 2019

A mourning most welcome! Great poem

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Magdalena Biela 06 October 2019

Thank you for reading and loving my poem...

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