Monday, May 19, 2008

Choosing Who I Am Comments

Rating: 5.0

Only last year began
my frail social life.
All the new people to meet,
all the mood-swings, delight to strife.
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Julie Neises
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Stone Granite 20 May 2008

You have captured the essence of coming of age, when we are shrouded in uncertainty. You articulated that moment in life beautifully. There is an element of sadness to this poem as well that seals the deal for me – this is a wonderful poem.

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