You dealt the cards
Today
I began to cry
Inside
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Wow. Raw, passionate, emotion as it should be: you leave much untold, but just enough to make the poem tantalisingly right.
Honey i'm wonder that some of your poems are actions of your life, and i trully believe is so, and sometimes i guess it make you comfortable to have that relief here, these poem is more about you, i like the end part, I love him Think about how much I die Inside that show very close dedication to your soulmate. keep going.
becca.....this poem comes under your best list....i specially like the last two lines.................much touching and true.......sebastine.....
wow is purely different, it's very unusual sense, good! !
Not blame me for choosing him, Who routinely stalks my livingl drreams, If my heart always cries for him, Do you think is it my fault or sin. Good poem full of emotions: Dr Hitesh C Sheth
Sweet outpouring of sincere emotions. CP