Monday, June 8, 2015

Choose One's Ground Comments

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hell-born ideas cruising around
invasion of degrading softness
laziness, craziness of cognizing
wild, seditious babbling abound
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Dorothy Kardas, Psy.D. Th.D.
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Frank P. Lester 09 June 2015

Marvelous work Dr! Reading the 2nd stanza made me think immediately of the countless criminals who murder their own unborn children & walk freely among us! They all belong in prison for abortion is a worse crime than a murder! As always, lots of insights compacted in this poem. Indeed, we can't be real without following God's Truth, if we refuse serving Him alone, and if remaining proud. Too many souls around us are destroying the joy of living & corrupting young minds. Aggravating destroyers, but ultimately as you concluded we can only feel pity for what awaits them for eternity without repentance. Your expressions are super & style of writing forceful, powerful keeping the attention & emotion going strong. Thanks Dr. God bless!

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