Monday, September 17, 2012

Choose Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

I cry and I don't know why,
I vent and stress,
I struggle in a mess,
I scream and feel frustrated,
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Lenore Lee
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Greg Davidson 18 November 2012

Thoghts so succinctly expressed and a wonderful finish to those thoughts which haunt so many of us. I have found another of your poems that I will enjoy returning to many times.

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Vijay Sai R 12 November 2012

truly philosophical poem....

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Hans Vr 23 September 2012

Wonderful, excellent, I feel like only writing super superlatives here. It is such a great truth. Life is so complex, Often we cry, Often we are in tumult But if we look inside, we do not find a good reason. If we smile, it is so easy to find a reason and what is more, the world will smile with us. Fantastic poem, really inspiring. Keep writing more, Lenore

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Abdallah Gamal 20 September 2012

Woow! what a beautiful picture contains all the colours of life, another great poem ^^__^^ Keep inspiring us! ! ! ! ! : D

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